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Lesson 13 ~35 min Unit 4 · Data Science +85 XP

Communicating Findings Clearly

In 2020, Australian Chief Medical Officer Professor Paul Kelly held daily press conferences, translating complex COVID-19 data into 3-minute plain-language summaries watched by 4 million people.

Today's hook: In 2020, Australian Chief Medical Officer Professor Paul Kelly briefed the public about COVID-19 transmission data almost every day. His audience included grandparents without science backgrounds, journalists, nurses, and policy makers. He had to translate the same data into completely different language for each group — without changing what the data actually said. When he got it right, people understood what to do. When the communication was unclear, confusion spread as fast as the virus itself. If you measured how quickly a sound travels through different materials, how would you explain it differently to a 6-year-old versus a physics student?
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Think First
warm-up

You have completed a brilliant investigation, but your report is full of abbreviations, has no graphs and jumps straight to conclusions without explaining the method.

What problems will your reader face? What might they misunderstand or fail to trust about your work?

Write your prediction in your book before reading on.
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Why Communication Matters
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Two students run the same experiment on how temperature affects the speed of an enzyme reaction. Student A writes one page of dense jargon with no graphs, no units, and conclusions buried in the third paragraph. Student B writes a clear 200-word report with a titled graph, labelled axes, and a one-sentence conclusion. Their actual results are identical. Which report will be trusted, cited and built on by the next scientist? Communication is the bridge between your private notebook and public knowledge. No matter how brilliant your experiment is, its value depends on whether other people can understand, check and build on it.

Good scientific communication has three pillars. Clarity: use precise language and define your terms so no one has to guess what you mean. Honesty: report all your results, including the ones that do not fit your prediction. Hiding inconvenient data is scientific misconduct. Audience awareness: a primary-school class needs analogies and simple words; a research journal needs technical detail and statistical analysis. The same discovery must be told differently to different listeners.

Finally, communication includes visuals. A well-chosen graph can reveal a pattern that hides in a table of numbers. But a confusing or misleading graph can hide the truth just as effectively. Always label axes, use consistent scales and cite your sources.

Example

A student discovers that seedlings grow faster under blue light. For a class presentation, they use a bar graph and say “Blue light boosted growth by 20 %.” For a science journal, they add error bars, sample size and a p-value. The core claim stays the same, but the detail and precision change.

Real-world anchor

ANSTO runs public tours and school programs to explain nuclear science in plain language, while their peer-reviewed papers use dense technical detail. The same organisation adapts its message to its audience every day, showing that audience awareness is not “dumbing down” — it is respecting your reader.

Watch out

Some students think that using big words and complicated sentences makes them sound more scientific. It does not. The greatest scientists — like Howard Florey, who explained penicillin simply enough to convince factories to mass-produce it — know that clarity is power, not simplicity.

Which change best shows audience awareness?
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What You'll Master
objectives

Know

  • Scientific communication must be clear, logical and appropriate for the audience.
  • Reports typically include aim, method, results, discussion and conclusion sections.

Understand

  • Good communication allows others to repeat, evaluate and extend your work.
  • Visual aids like tables and graphs are essential tools for communicating data effectively.

Can Do

  • Structure a simple scientific report with appropriate sections.
  • Select and present visual aids that support clear communication of results.
Cross-lesson links: A good scientific report pulls together all the unit skills — the data tables from Lesson 4, the graphs from Lesson 5, the pattern descriptions from Lesson 6, and the claims-evidence-reasoning structure from Lesson 11 — so Lesson 13 is where everything connects.
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Words You Need
vocabulary
Scientific reportA structured document that presents the aim, method, results and conclusions of an investigation.
AbstractA brief summary of a scientific report that outlines the key aim, methods, results and conclusion.
MethodA detailed description of how an investigation was conducted, allowing others to repeat it.
DiscussionThe section of a report where results are interpreted, compared with other studies and evaluated for limitations.
Visual aidA graph, table, diagram or image used to help communicate information clearly and efficiently.
AudienceThe intended readers or listeners for a piece of scientific communication.
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Spot the Trap
heads-up

Wrong: Scientific writing should use complex words to sound impressive.

Right: The best scientific writing is clear and concise. Complex jargon excludes readers and obscures meaning. Use simple language where possible.

Wrong: A good report only needs results and a conclusion.

Right: Method and discussion sections are crucial. Without them, readers cannot judge reliability or understand the reasoning behind the conclusion.

Wrong: Using vague or exaggerated language in conclusions.

Right: Words like 'proves', 'always' and 'never' are usually too strong. Use cautious language like 'supports', 'suggests' and 'indicates' unless the evidence is overwhelming.

Wrong: Including visual aids without referring to them in the text.

Right: Every table and graph needs an in-text reference such as 'as shown in Figure 1'. The text should also interpret the visual, not just mention it.

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Structure of a Scientific Report
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A scientific report is like a recipe: it must be written so clearly that someone else can follow it, repeat it and check your conclusions. Most reports follow a standard structure that readers expect.

Aim: state the question you are investigating in one or two sentences. Hypothesis: write a testable prediction. Method: list materials and steps in enough detail that another student could replicate your experiment. Results: present data in tables and graphs, without interpretation. Discussion: explain what the results mean, compare them with other studies and discuss limitations. Conclusion: answer the aim directly and suggest what should be tested next.

Each section has a distinct job. Mixing results with conclusions confuses the reader. Skipping the method makes your work impossible to check. Keeping them separate shows that you understand the difference between observation and interpretation.

Scientific Report Structure Title Descriptive and specific Aim Question you are investigating Hypothesis Testable prediction Method Steps + materials (enough to repeat) Results Tables + graphs (no interpretation) Discussion Interpret results + limitations Conclusion Answer the aim; suggest next steps References PLAN DATA INTERPRET
Example

A student writes: “The plant grew 5 cm (result). This suggests that light intensity affects growth (discussion). Therefore, the aim was met (conclusion).” Separating observation from interpretation makes the argument easy to follow and easy to critique.

Real-world anchor

When CSIRO publishes a research paper, peer reviewers first check that the method is detailed enough to be repeated and that results are presented without spin. This standard structure is why scientists around the world can build on Australian research within days of publication.

Watch out

Students often think the conclusion is just a restatement of the results. It is not. The conclusion answers the original aim, evaluates the hypothesis and looks forward. If your conclusion only repeats numbers, you have missed the point of the discussion section.

Sort the steps+7 XP

Put these sections of a scientific report in the correct order.

  • Discuss what the results mean and acknowledge limitations.
  • Conclude by answering the aim and suggesting next steps.
  • Present the results without interpretation.
  • State the aim and hypothesis.
  • Describe the method and materials.
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Using Visual Aids
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Humans are visual creatures. A well-designed graph or diagram can reveal trends, outliers and relationships that hide in rows of numbers. But a poorly chosen visual can obscure the truth or even mislead the reader.

Choose the right format for your data. Bar graphs compare categories. Line graphs show change over time. Scatter plots reveal correlations between two continuous variables. Pie charts work only when you have a few categories that add up to a whole; they become unreadable with too many slices. Never use a 3-D effect just for decoration — it distorts proportions.

Every visual must be self-contained. Label both axes with units, give the graph a descriptive title, and add a legend if there are multiple data series. Most importantly, refer to every visual in the text. A lonely graph with no explanation leaves the reader guessing what you want them to see.

How to Describe a Graph in Your Report Plant Height vs Fertiliser outlier Fertiliser (g) Height (cm) 1. Describe the trend: "As fertiliser increased, plant height increased steadily." 2. Quote a specific value: "The maximum height recorded was 42 cm at 20 g fertiliser." 3. Acknowledge an anomaly: "An anomaly was observed at 25 g — likely a measurement error." Use all three sentence types in your Results and Discussion sections.
Example

A student plots temperature against time using a line graph with clear axes and a title: “Cooling curve of 200 mL water starting at 80 °C.” The line clearly shows a rapid drop followed by a plateau, making the pattern obvious at a glance.

Real-world anchor

The Bureau of Meteorology publishes rainfall and temperature maps that are used by farmers, insurers and emergency managers. Their visuals are successful because they use consistent colour scales, clear legends and plain-language captions — the same principles you should use in your reports.

Watch out

Some students think adding more colours, 3-D effects and clip art makes a graph better. It does not. Decorative clutter distracts from the data. The best visuals are clean, accurate and focused on one message.

Predict / Observe / Explain+8 XP
1 · Predict
2 · Observe
3 · Explain
Scenario

You are presenting data on how test scores change with study time. You have ten data points. Should you use a bar graph or a scatter plot?

Step 1 · Your prediction
Your prediction: (none recorded)
Observation

A scatter plot shows the continuous relationship between study time and score, revealing trends and outliers. A bar graph would force the data into arbitrary time brackets, hiding the detailed pattern.

Step 3 · Now explain

Use these terms in your explanation: continuous variable · correlation · outlier

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Writing for Your Audience
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The same scientific finding can be written for a Year 3 class, a newspaper or a PhD examiner. The facts do not change, but the language, detail and structure must adapt to the reader.

For a general audience, replace jargon with everyday words and use analogies. Instead of “photosynthesis converts radiant energy into chemical potential energy,” say “plants use sunlight to make sugar.” For a scientific audience, keep precise terminology and include uncertainty ranges, sample sizes and statistical tests. For a policy audience, focus on actionable conclusions and practical implications.

One pitfall is assumed knowledge. Never assume your reader knows what you know. Define abbreviations on first use, explain methods briefly and answer the “so what?” question. If your grandma cannot grasp the main point, your communication needs work — unless your grandma is a retired chemist, in which case you can use the jargon.

Example

A researcher writes: “The mean arterial pressure decreased by 15 mmHg (p < 0.05) following administration of the therapeutic agent.” For a hospital newsletter they rewrite: “The new medicine lowered blood pressure by 15 points in most patients.” Same result, different language.

Real-world anchor

Howard Florey had to convince both scientific journals and factory managers to mass-produce penicillin during World War II. He used precise data for the scientists and simple, urgent language for the industrialists. Adapting his message saved countless lives.

Watch out

Students often think that simplifying language means simplifying the science. It does not. You can explain quantum mechanics to a ten-year-old using analogies without changing the underlying physics. Simplification is a skill, not a compromise.

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A scientific report should always use complex words to sound impressive.

How are you completing this lesson?

Revisit Your Thinking
reflect

At the start of the lesson you were asked: "Explain your results to your grandma, then to a chemist — what changes?" You probably realised straight away that the language and detail level would be different.

Now that you know the structure and purpose of a scientific report, can you be more specific? Which sections change for a general audience vs a scientific one, and what stays the same no matter who is reading?

Rewrite the plan for this report, listing the sections you would add or improve and explaining how each change helps the reader.

Write your updated thinking in your book.
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Which section of a scientific report tells others how to repeat the experiment?
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Why should scientific conclusions use cautious language like 'suggests' rather than 'proves'?
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What is the main purpose of visual aids in a scientific report?
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Which is most important when writing for a non-scientific audience?
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A graph included in a report should always be:
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Check Your Understanding
short answer

1. List the main sections of a scientific report and state what each section should contain.

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2. Why is it important to include a method section even if your results are impressive?

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3. Describe two ways you could adapt the same scientific finding for a primary school audience and a high school science class.

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Show Your Working
12 marks total
5 MARKS

SA1. Describe the purpose of each section in a standard scientific report and explain how the sections work together to communicate findings.

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4 MARKS

SA2. A student writes 'This experiment proves that fertiliser helps plants grow.' Rewrite this conclusion using more appropriate scientific language and explain why the change matters.

Hint: Think about the difference between proof and support in science.

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3 MARKS

SA3. Explain why the method section is essential for scientific communication, using the concept of repeatability in your answer.

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Comprehensive Answers

Quick Check

1. B — The method section tells others how to repeat the experiment.

2. B — Scientific evidence usually supports rather than absolutely proves a conclusion.

3. B — Visual aids communicate complex data clearly and efficiently.

4. B — Adapting language and detail to the reader's background is most important.

5. B — A graph should always be referred to and explained in the text.

Show Your Working Model Answers

SA1 (5 marks): Aim [0.5] — states what is being investigated [0.5]. Method [0.5] — explains how the investigation was done with enough detail to repeat [0.5]. Results [0.5] — presents data [0.5]. Discussion [0.5] — interprets results and evaluates limitations [0.5]. Conclusion [0.5] — answers the aim [0.5]. The sections work together by moving from what was done, to what was found, to what it means, creating a logical flow [1].

SA2 (4 marks): Rewrite: 'This experiment suggests that fertiliser helps plants grow' or 'The results support the idea that fertiliser helps plants grow' [1]. The change matters because 'proves' implies absolute certainty [1], whereas science is based on evidence that supports but does not prove conclusions [1]. Using cautious language reflects the possibility of other explanations or limitations [1].

SA3 (3 marks): The method section is essential because it allows others to repeat the investigation [1]. Repeatability means that when another scientist follows the same method, they should obtain similar results [1]. Without a clear method, readers cannot verify the results or judge whether the investigation was fair and reliable [1].

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Quick Review

Aim

States what you are investigating

Method

Explains how with detail to repeat

Results

Presents data with visual aids

Discussion

Interprets and evaluates findings

Conclusion

Answers the aim directly

Visual aid

Needs number, title and in-text reference

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